𝐒𝐄𝐂𝐎𝐍𝐃 𝐑𝐎𝐔𝐍𝐃 𝐉𝐔𝐃𝐆𝐈𝐍𝐆 ~ 𝐅𝐀𝐍𝐓𝐀𝐒𝐘 𝐑𝐄𝐒𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐒

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Judged by )cwang1

THIRD PLACE

The Cursed and the Killers by BlackMare25

Cover and Title:  5/10

Blurb:  7/10

Plot:  17/20

Grammar:  10/15

Creativity:  19/20

Personal Interest:  20/25

Total:  78/100

Review: I could barely see the title on the cover, so I would suggest changing the layout. Additionally, I did spot quite a few punctuation mistakes that made the reading experience less enjoyable. I did really like the concept; I thought that it was super unique! Overall, I love your character description!

SECOND PLACE

On Sapphire Wings and Jade Seales by Nightingale257

Cover and Title:  8/10

Blurb:  9/10

Plot:  18/20

Grammar:  13/15

Creativity:  19/20

Personal Interest:  24/25

Total:  91/100

Review: Wow! I absolutely love your description and concept! You used a lot of good vocabulary words that really helped to enhance your description. I did find quite a few punctuation mistakes, so I would suggest working on that. Additionally, I would suggest employing cliffhangers a bit more. Other than that, a great job!

FIRST PLACE

Her Soul by Nefili123

Cover and Title:  10/10

Blurb:  9/10

Plot:  19/20

Grammar:  13/15

Creativity:  19/20

Personal Interest:  25/25

Total:  95/100

Review: Your writing was absolutely amazing! I loved the plot, which really made it a very good read. The only thing I would suggest is to perhaps reword your sentences and watch out for your punctuation. I did spot a few punctuation mistakes, and also, at times, you did word your sentences very weirdly. Other than that, I loved your story!


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