There's a Russian Boy 2nd year just like Miyuki they meet in their last year of Junior high, but Miyuki fell in love with Daiki Years ago and Daiki fell in love with Miyuki when he first saw him so will they get together or they give up and just spl...
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Sooooooo I've been gone for a little under a year maybe and a few people read this so I thank you for who ever has landed their eyes on this really bad piece of work and I'm sorry for you at the same time cause I'm terrible at writing.
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But I haven't been updating because I knew where I wanted to take this story but I didn't know how to put it into words. I would reread my chapters to make sure everything sounded right and I would forget to put in some details. Like the first chapter was supposed to be like a character introduction like I tell you how they look and everything but I forgot to put that. And then I forgot some minor details I wanted to put in like for example I wanted to put in.
Example~
The fox ran up the hill to meet the wolf. And the fox so loved the wolf dearly. The fox loved the magnificent white fur of the wolf as she danced around. But the fox was to shy because he was not as wonderful as the lovely wolf. The fox had a dirty black color with tiny bits of grey. But the wolf had a crush already and it was for a handsome bear with big arms like a tree that could break the little fox. So the fox would always stop half way up the hill before he reached the wolf. And would never make a sound until the fox died alone at last.
~end of example
With this I would always forget to add the part where I would describe the fox I would forget to add "with Tiny bits of gray". So readers would think they would be completely black in my mind. But then I wouldn't put enough detail on how a character thought either so I always confused myself when I read over it. I wouldn't know where I was going with something so I can't fix it so I would have to change the whole theme of a paragraph so it wouldn't lead up to the next and would confuse many people. So I stopped because I figured it was pointless, but now I'm back and I think I improved a little I know much more then what I did before. So I'm gonna try and continue this story. But before I continue with the chapter I was working on I need to catch up on some things with what I did before and I might change up this story a little. So forgive me for leaving so imma try to continue. Have a good day. <3
