Lookingforfeedback Stories

Idea for a new fantasy race, looking for feedback, will add more in the future.

This is a work in progress that may become the prologue to a longer story if I can figure out where to go with it. So for this one I'm looking for feedback, suggestions and the like.

A thirteen years old boy, who's been through hell, is about to have an even worse year than he can ever imagine. With the fate of his life, and many others in his hands, he needs to work with people to stay alive.

Scarred from past experiences, Scarlet does her best to protect her shattered family. From police to friends, no one can be trusted. As her past tried to recapture her, Scarlet must do her best to pick up the pieces to destroy the man who is trying to kill the little she has left.

A princess and her best friend team up with an assassin to kill the king...secrets, magic, and truth will all be revealed...

Separated when it happened. A family try's to reunite and get to a place we're that can ride out the upcoming storm the apocalypse will inevitably bring. Dive-in and become a character yourself in this first time writers journey to create a fun and exciting experience for all ages in "The Saint Way Home". Thanks for giving this continuing work in progress a try in advance. I will try to keep the story moving with new chapters as often as possible. Looking forward to feedback. Let me know. It's my first time writing so I would like to know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong by any other writers reading. Thanks !

Aelynn, Commander of the 4th Legion is ordered to sail south to Sienan in order to secure an alliance but only under the condition that she takes out a vampire plaguing the nearby cities. Read on as Aelynn maneuvers through foreign lands on a quest to kill one of the night's fiercest predators, unfolding the dark secrets of Eldmere city as she struggles to survive the deadly creatures that inhabit the country. A work in progress, high fantasy story that is looking for some honest feed back. Seven years in the making but going through a harsh revamp. Chapter updates cannot be predicted but this story will never be set down.

Welcome to reading this book! If you're here, get ready for a peek into the sometimes chaotic, always entertaining world of a daycare teacher. Working with kids of all ages-from the very first day they walk through the door until the last day they leave-has given me a lifetime of stories, some of which are so funny, they're almost unbelievable. But trust me, they're real. This book is a collection of those stories: the rants, the laughter, the triumphs, and the frustrations that come with the job. It's a behind-the-scenes look at the unpredictable world of toddlers, preschoolers, and school-age children who never fail to surprise you with their wild imaginations, limitless energy, and unexpected wisdom. From the very first day I stepped into the classroom-nervous, excited, and not knowing exactly what to expect-to now, after years of experience, I've learned a lot. Mostly, that no two days are ever the same, and you can't plan for everything. Some days, it's all about surviving the tantrums, cleaning up spills, and keeping everyone safe. Other days, it's about celebrating tiny victories and discovering just how creative and funny kids can be. So, as you turn these pages, enjoy these rants, these funny moments, and the wild adventures that come with working with kids. They'll keep you on your toes, make you laugh, and sometimes make Let's dive in and enjoy the rollercoaster ride that is a day in the life of a daycare teacher. just looking for a laugh enjoy my book