Pleasecritique Stories

The mind is a horrible thing to waste. Now when you have a mind like mine, where monsters come out to play and happy things come in bursts, it helps to write things down...

What happens when Ash finds her friend beaten and bruised in the streets?

I need to practice my writing, so I'm making a book! this will be filled with short stories, whether it be fan stories or original stories. I may even take some requests...