Too Good
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Last published Sat, Jan 6, 2018
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" I should never have let you into my life" I shouted in an abrasive tone with tears running down my face. The tears are hot and full of regret. They sting but not as much as the pain he has caused in my life. I'm tired of looking over all the wrong he's done.
"Damn it Vivian just say it, tell me how you're too good for me and leave me just like everyone, but never forget. I loved you. Never forget" Jake yelled while holding my pale face gently in his hands.
I looked away from him and he stood up and left me and the babies, forever.
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