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I'm just looking for feedback on my writing
yes I know it's choppy and the transitions need work, but other than those, can I have feedback on how to improve my writing?

I might add a few more writing pieces in the future, just to see what you guys thinkHak Cipta Dilindungi Undang-Undang

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Feedback for a Septiplier Story
Sun, Sep 24, 2017

I'm just looking for feedback on my writing
yes I know it's choppy and the transitions need work, but other than those, can I have feedback on how to improve my writing?

I might add a few more writing pieces in the future, just to see what you guys think

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Feedback for a Septiplier Story
Sun, Sep 24, 2017

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