HER EMPTINESS:short poem

HER EMPTINESS:short poem

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Hey guys this is a really short poem that I wrote for my English class. Since I am in the poem Unit in class I wanted to have more than one or to opinions from my class mates and teacher, So I decide it to post it here .I will love to comment with sincerity you're opinions. THANKS! P.S. I will post more when I have the chance.
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This is a novella I had to write for school and I would like some feed back. EXCERPT Pain is something I've become very accustomed to. Whether I like it or not. It sounds mental though, I know. My biggest fear is being alone, even though I already am. As I walk into the school I see them, my 'friends'. They're sitting in the quad all chatting to one another. I try to turn around before one sees me but I see one waving me over so I'm left with no choice but to go. "Hey guys" I greet them with a shaky voice. So if anyone has feedback for me or just wants to talk comment or message me anytime and I'll get back to you as soon an I can. Also I need a good book cover so if you send me one I'll use it but in the mean time I'll be looking for one.

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