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β Grey Flame Saga - Book Thirteen 13 πΎ
π’ Grey Flame - Side Arc 2L: Pressure Points (Novel) - Fan Fiction π
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β΄οΈ Grey Flame - Side Arc 2L: "Pressure Points"
Placement: After "Arc 2B: Jedi Survivor The weight We Carry " - before "Arc 3: The Ghosts Of Felucia "
Focus: Seren Vell, Trilla Suduri, Montalis Jorin, Anakin Skywalker
Theme: Cracks in confidence, shifting mentorship, fear of failure, growth through fire
Tone: Emotional fracture β’ Quiet fury β’ Mentor transfer β’ Warrior wisdom
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π₯ Story Summary:
"After returning from the fog of Sith interference, Seren Vell sharpens her edge - but begins unraveling beneath it.
In the upper-level training halls, she disarms her own master, Trilla Suduri, in a furious, unchecked sparring match. But the victory is hollow. Trilla's silence says more than any lecture - and Seren storms away, questioning the purpose of being held back by someone afraid to push her.
Trilla spirals inward. Doubt claws through her mind. She turns to Jorin, then Anakin, hoping to understand whether she's fit to keep guiding a student whose strength may already be eclipsing her own.
The truth hurts - but it clears the path.
Anakin reminds Trilla that love can cloud judgment, and perhaps it's time for Seren to be trained not gently... but directly.
In a midnight confrontation, Jorin steps in.
One week. No filters. No comfort. No restraint.
Seren gets what she wanted - but not the way she expected.
Jorin doesn't come to teach her power. He comes to teach her respect.
The torch is passed - not out of failure...
but out of faith that Seren still has more to learn."