@-maddiecline - Hey, author!
I just finished reading SERENDIPITY, and I'm completely sat for it through and through. I honestly wasn't expecting to get so invested so quickly, but here I am.
First of all, I absolutely love the title you chose. It fits the story so well, and I also really liked that you included this in the description:
↳ JULIANNA TAYLOR
in·ter·link
/ˈin(t)ərˌliNGk/
verb
past tense: interlinked; past participle: interlinked
join or connect (two or more things) together.
she had eyes like Bambi and a tongue like a viper.
I don't know why, but that description immediately pulled me in. It's such a beautiful contrast because it perfectly captures how someone can seem so gentle and innocent while also being fiercely outspoken and strong. It tells you so much about Julianna's character in just a few lines, and I thought that was incredibly well done.
And then, in Chapter 0: Characters, when you wrote that he was her idea of an angel... ughhhhh, my heart. That line had absolutely no business hitting as hard as it did.
I genuinely love the dynamic between Julianna Marie Taylor (Routledge) and John B. Also, I have to say, I love the name you gave her. This might just be me, but I've always loved characters with a first, middle, and last name when they flow together really well, and Julianna Marie Taylor just sounds so pretty and fits her perfectly.
I also really enjoy the dynamic she has with the rest of the group. They're all so chaotic together, but in the best way possible. Their interactions feel natural, funny, and full of life, which makes it so easy to get attached to everyone.
I don't know if you'll ever see this comment, let alone read it, but I just wanted to let you know that you've definitely gained a devoted reader. This story has already become one of my favorites, and I can't wait to keep reading.
