AVirtualUtopia

@samila1223 Hey! I read your new book and I love it so much I've added it to my library. You've done really well with your grammar this time but what I think could make it even better is to focus on punctuation now. It's a great book and I can't wait to find out what happens to Alexander and Carly!

Psycho_Yandere_

@booktopia0410   Thank you, ypur advice was really helpful to me, and I promise to focus on the panctuation
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AVirtualUtopia

@samila1223 Hey! I read your new book and I love it so much I've added it to my library. You've done really well with your grammar this time but what I think could make it even better is to focus on punctuation now. It's a great book and I can't wait to find out what happens to Alexander and Carly!

Psycho_Yandere_

@booktopia0410   Thank you, ypur advice was really helpful to me, and I promise to focus on the panctuation
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AVirtualUtopia

@anjaaa1126 
          I thought it was a bit hard to follow the writing, it was a bit choppy, maybe that appeals to some people. If you are friendly with any accounts or you have a friend that owns an acount you could allow them access to your story as an editor. You're dong a really great job so far though, keep it up!

ganymeda26

@booktopia0410 thanks for telling me that. I should take them as considerations. hope you keep on reading it ;) have  nice day
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AVirtualUtopia

@anjaaa1126 Hey your book was great! Loved the story line but I got a bit lost in the writing at the start. Have you ever considered teaming up with a friend/editor? Hope you right some more soon

ganymeda26

@booktopia0410 I appreciate your time and votes! lost how if you don't mind to elaborate? you mean like teaming with a friend/editor here? and yeah hope you read on my story :))
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