Adonalsium

@Adonalsium might unfortunately be my least favorite wattpad feature. terribly sorry my story wasn’t your taste (that one hand praying/clapping emoji)

Well I guess I can't see it so no way you can

@TurtleGuy22 Do they not? So you can't see when I put 

@Alidokadri ight that's fine. You can get back to it at any time, and if you decide you don't want to, then that's also fine. Ayanokoji is technically still the protagonist, if you're wondering, and the idea was that it's a dual POV. So he won't be going anywhere, and neither will the original COTE main characters.

@Alidokadri There's nothing wrong on your end from memory, I've just read so many COTE fics recently and many of them being OC fics that I disliked. Most of the stories in that list I just decided I'd take another look at in a few months when I have fresh eyes. I think recently I've been more harsh than I'd usually be due to burnout.
            
            I reread the first 2 chapters after you sent me this and it definitely seems good so far, I'll try and remember to get back to you once I actually read the whole thing in a few months

@Adonalsium it’s really for the last 4-5 chapters of Rezero so the Reinhard Kiyo fight and the new jjk fanfic I have rn. 

@angle99999 oh you've changed the whole thing? Amazing I'll have a full reread then.
            
            Yeah this theatre script format definitely doesn't allow for more in depth descriptions and doesn't read as nicely, love to hear that.

Thanks <3

Ty yea the ffdisc recently discovered your greatness

@A7mous it's funny that I've had 3 years of nothing, and out of the blue I'm getting people messaging me left and right, I'll look at them in a tick

@StrongIsBack Rewarding attentive readers is brilliant, unreliable narration is one of my favourite storywriting techniques.
            
            Funnily enough I have the same issue as you. There are lots of drafts I have for stories over my life that I've laid out an entire plan for but I get lost in the details and grow bored of fleshing out the writing

@LordOfCheddar96 Very kind words. I'm really looking forward to how I'll get to the end of the story.
            
            I usually have the beginning and the end visualized when starting a story. It's really the destination where I make a lot of adjustments because good ideas don't come in one go, they come in intervals of bursts.
            
            I like playing around with the idea of the readers being confused at what Kiyotaka's doing, then understanding what's going on after a re-read, or once we get close to the reveal. Rewarding attentive readers is one thing I like from the works I read. Hopefully, I could replicate the effect with the things I had in mind.
            
            Liquid Inspiration is more or less abandoned. I really don't like harem anymore... and well, I was kinda coerced into writing it that way in 2023.

@StrongIsBack Yeah I really enjoy restart, can't wait to see where that ends up going.
            
            Harems were a phase that I quickly grew out of, it's a boring cop-out of a trope. Do you plan on continuing to try rewriting liquid inspiration? Or is that a loose end as well.

Ok so I checked my Prologue and holy dude thank you, I didn't remember it being that bad :sob:

@Josephstudio3006 ah so it's the early chapter stuff

@Josephstudio3006 there are too many grammatical errors inside it for me to enjoy. I liked the premise behind it which is why I gave it a try, but couldn't get past small things like bad paragraph placement, lack of spaces after commas, small things that add up