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Hello there....before anything i wanna say sorry and it is a bit late...
Im just a reader that loves reading mafia and gangster book and i stumbled upon your book but i had trouble reading it. All the punctuations, paragraph and sentences is not properly written and the POV is not well done. Dont get me wrong im not an english speaker but i love the languages and this book got my attention but i cant seem to understand the storyline...IM REALLY SORRY if u think that im not appreciating your story thats really not what i mean and i dont know how to put it in a nicer way.i sincerely write this cause i hope you will do some editing that is if you have time but im gonna finish it either way...goodbye and thank you for your time.
