AliehsAugust

hjeaxx

Hi author! May slight concern lang po ako huhu. First time ko po magbasa ng story mo. I'm still at the first 5 chapters nung His 18 year old wife mistress, nahooked ako agad, nafefeel ko na ang ganda ng storyline. Ang concern ko lang po is sadya po bang may scenes na naskiskip? Like yung scenes around sa time na binuhusan ng juice and yung may sinabi something abt her boobs. Also, nag end yung scene ng chap 5 na naiwan si Krayol magisa sa paglalakad, then first part ng chap 6 she's having a conversation with someone named "Gaara". Like sino po sya, san sya nanggaling, bat bigla na lang lumitaw. Huhu sorryyy po. No hate po, I just want to be enlightened. Thank you vv much ^^

hjeaxx

            
            Oh, okay po! Thank uuu. 
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AliehsAugust

@hjeaxx hi! Thanks po sa pag reach out! Uhm medyo magulo po talaga ako magsulat dahil hindi chronological or sequential to add thrill. Pero nasa susunod na mga chapters naman po ang ibang details. 
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