AnSuJo

Hey posted a story a while back. Any feed back? Going to update soon but I'd enjoy feed fact on what I've given so far. 

Post a story for everyone to start reading! Got the first four chapters up! Please look at it! Give feedback, insult me, compliment me, whatever! Just read it pretty please!

Hello my Five wonderful followers!
          Thanks so much for following me, first off, it means a lot to know that senpai noticed me.
          Second off on my little message, I'd like to ask you all a favor. 
          Share my story, I post on here so people with read it, and give me feed back. Not to be invisible like the short nerdy guy at prom. 
          Third, on my little message... Go ask the short nerdy guy to dance. Come on. He's super sweet. Also he's less likely to feel you up while you two dance. Unless you're in to that, then (GASP) Senpai!