@ Angel57779 I understand now. Sorry for suddenly converting to English and sorry for mistaking Portuguese with Spanish. And don't worry, though the book in few places lacks a few aspects, I plan on finishing this one and starting another one. If you're curious, I plan on making two more books of this series. Also, did I understand well that you're from Brazil? If yes then I'm glad I understood something in completely different language than my own :)
Hope you enjoy it and if there's something you want to comment or criticize about my story, feel free to share your mind. I'm open to hearing from readers, as I've never wrote a story of my own before. Have a good day ;)