AngelaGL2

Hello everyone I made a Instagram for this page if you would like to follow it its angela_GL2

Empty_Pools

Hey, Angela. I hope you accept constructive criticism. I've read a few of your books, and even though they seem quite interesting, your writing skills are very poor. I'm talking about grammar specially. If you want to get better, you NEED to learn the basics. You barely use commas and periods, which makes most of the sentences confusing; theres a lot of wrongly written words, etc. The solution for all of this, is simply reading. Read a lot Angela :). I'm talking about books by actual authors, not amateur wattpad fictions. This will help you a lot! Good luck.

1800-bigdickenergy

Because that was actual  constructive criticism
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