Arkykat

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          	I apologize for the long wait but  Chapters 1-4 have been edited and have some changes.  The major change is Lauren has been renamed as Tamera, several people said that her and Lisette's name were too similar. And after re-reading the story I had to agree.  
          	
          	 I Finally got Chapter 5 up.  
          	
          	I am looking for an editor and would appreciate suggestions.  chapter 6 by the end of this month.  I'm trying to get some editing done on it.  My grammar isn't as good as it should be and I am working on it.  
          	
          	Thanks for following me and for reading.
          	
          	Arkykat

Arkykat

Oops. 
          
          I apologize for the long wait but  Chapters 1-4 have been edited and have some changes.  The major change is Lauren has been renamed as Tamera, several people said that her and Lisette's name were too similar. And after re-reading the story I had to agree.  
          
           I Finally got Chapter 5 up.  
          
          I am looking for an editor and would appreciate suggestions.  chapter 6 by the end of this month.  I'm trying to get some editing done on it.  My grammar isn't as good as it should be and I am working on it.  
          
          Thanks for following me and for reading.
          
          Arkykat

Arkykat

Chapters 1-4 have been edited and have some changes.  The major change is Lauren has been renamed as Tamera, several people said that her and Lisette's name were too similar. MAnd after re-reading the story I had to agree.   I Finally got Chapter 5 up.  I am looking for an editor and would appreciate suggestions.  chapter 6 by the end of this month.  I'm trying to get some editing done on it.  My grammar isn't as good as it should be and I am working on it.  Thanks for following me and for reading.