ArtemisWriter

Hey! I am looking for some criticism on my works. I was wondering if you could check some of them out? Thanks! :D

Hey there! Thanks for joining my contest, I hope it'll be fun for you to write your entry. I'm looking forward to reading it :)
          
          I'll add you to the list. 

To be honest, I had enough 'amo' from the first page so that's all I read, even though I left it at a bit of a cliff hanger. (And before I forget, some of what I explained can be used all the way through). 
          It was definitely interesting and exciting if that counts for anything, and it was a lot better than some of the things I've made myself critique.

Hey, just here to say thanks for becoming a fan. I really appreciate it.

Hi, how’s it going? Welcome to Wattpad !!!
          
          I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :))  Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)