kyaraa66

Girl you book required major editing, if you are not comfortable in english then write in Hindi , no one will judge you for that , but yk English dialogues are not understandable, I've to read the Hindi one to understand what they meant to say and also you could've just AI for editing,  I don't mean to demean you but you really need to work on you english. I'm only reading because I liked the storyline and it's genuinely good but you definitely need to work on you english also you can use AI it'll help you with grammer, sentence structure and ofcourse exposure to new words . 
          
          
          P.S. I don't mean to be harsh , sorry if it sounded rude.

Author_Prakriti

@kyaraa66 no no you are not a harsh sweetheart. Aap jo bhi boli hai, sahi hai, last tak padhoge toh improve dikhegi aur ha main story ko re edit karungi. 
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ananyaa6954

✨ Hey everyone! ✨
          
          I’m currently working on my story “AAROHI: HIS JAANA” and it truly means a lot to me. 
          This story holds emotions, dreams, love, and pieces of my heart that I’m excited to share with you all.
          
          I would really appreciate your support — whether it’s reading, voting, commenting, or simply sharing it with others. Your encouragement keeps me motivated to keep writing and improving. 
          
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TrishVerse

Two families. One secret and a hatred that runs deeper than either of them know.
          
          He was supposed to be her enemy.
          She was supposed to be his revenge.
          Neither of them expected this.
          
          She hates everything he stands for.
          He can't stay away from her.
          
          And someone out there wants to make sure they never find the truth.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405771963?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Trishverse
          
          Sorry author for posting here.