AyishaEdeline1

@unclegarf Hey Gary! Actually, I like it quite a bit. I'm almost finished with it just stupid things keep getting in my way! And you know what for me, I wish I could get into a continuous writing mode but this next chapter is a battle for me! So many different things need to happen I just don't want the ideas to come out all jumbled up you know. Anyways, take care and I hope to hear from you soon. (: 

AyishaEdeline1

@unclegarf Hey Gary! Actually, I like it quite a bit. I'm almost finished with it just stupid things keep getting in my way! And you know what for me, I wish I could get into a continuous writing mode but this next chapter is a battle for me! So many different things need to happen I just don't want the ideas to come out all jumbled up you know. Anyways, take care and I hope to hear from you soon. (: 

AyishaEdeline1

@unclegarf Yes, very much so. Hmmm.. well when you posted that message it was around 1 in the afternoon here if that helps any. And, is my dialogue not well structured? Oh no! I will have a look at the story, and do editing probably some time tomorrow because I do have more ideas spilling for the next chapter. Thanks a bunch!