OH MY GOD. OKAY, LIKE. I DON'T CARE THAT I'M BASICALLY... TALKING TO MYSELF ON HERE, BUT I'M PROUD OF MYSELF. I WAS STUDYING THROUGH MY OLD FANFICTIONS, AND DRAFTS... THOUSANDS OF DRAFTS BTW....
I REALIZED WHAT THEY HAVE BEEN LACKING... Slow minded... I am aware. BUT BUT. SIT THE FCK DOWN AND BUCKLE UP, BECAUSE I AM GOING TO DO BETTER MY PEEPS.
What I found out was that I lacked emotions, expressions, body movement, vocabulary... (Embarrassing.), describing scenery, and more!!! It makes a HUGE difference. I've been practicing it over, and studying deeper.
I think I'm gonna be ok.... I needed to rant this in here because ... YES.