@Black_cherry_candle
It seems that Untold is not finished? Just the way the ending was or did you mean to end it that way?
@BlFan0087 I lost interest in the story so I did. But if I ever do get interested in it again I might pick it up.
What are things that make you want to read a story?
@Black_cherry_candle thank you for the feedback I am struggling with some of those things which I am try to work on
It’s pretty obvious when an author does not storyboard or at least have some overall vision for the plot and characters at the time of conception. It’s a very bad idea when an author starts writing a story and does not know how it’ll end — these tend to be dissatisfying to read.
I’m also more likely to read a story that’s either complete or still being updated regularly. I will usually avoid an author if I notice multiple major plot, character, grammar, and spelling issues — I’d rather read high quality stories than try to decipher a mess that hasn’t been fully thought out.