BlueXMikoto0127

Im making a Fnaf fan fic story and i would like help on it anyone with ideas and opinions please tell me thanks love youuuu XD

BlueXMikoto0127

Im new here but i would like you all to tell me how im going and if you se something wrong or mispelled tell me ok :3

rremaspi

@bvbarmy_andysix96 You said you'd like pointers, yes? I happened to stumble across one of your works. The idea of it was creative, but in my honest opinion, I don't understand the whole dialogue thing people seem to be doing nowadays. The-Person 1: [What they say] instead of "[What they say]" Person 1 said.  Just pointing out that if it sounds like an actual story, you might attract more reads. 
            Attack on Titan?! *fistbump*
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