@bvbarmy_andysix96 You said you'd like pointers, yes? I happened to stumble across one of your works. The idea of it was creative, but in my honest opinion, I don't understand the whole dialogue thing people seem to be doing nowadays. The-Person 1: [What they say] instead of "[What they say]" Person 1 said. Just pointing out that if it sounds like an actual story, you might attract more reads.
Attack on Titan?! *fistbump*