HOW DO YOU WRITE "i went to my friends house" WITHOUT MAKING THE STORY A SLOWBURN AJDJS, i swear, my attention span is short yet i manage to make books into an unintentional slowburn, I HATE IT BECAUSE IT MAKES THE STORY OVERLY DETAILED TOO AND IF I WERE I READER, I WOULDNT DARE READ IT AND IT PISSES ME OFF KNOWING IT