CauseAngelsCried

@bookaholic7 thankyou. i will, if i can developp a plot, andd i have time. :) thanks alot. this means sooooo much to me! <3

CauseAngelsCried

@StarlessNight29 heres the thing, when i say use profanities, i mean dont say FUDGE, just say the real word :p and use them whenever needed, and when i say write dirty, i mean just a lil kisses here and there, amd as for the dirty write lines like *and we dove into the night, or he pushed us towards the bed/sofa whtevver it is * 
          I wont kill you yet. :D

CauseAngelsCried

@SecretlyCrying My thoughts exactly :D
          @StarlessNight29 i understand your pain. :D BTW, im shanzay if you didnt know :P Parhu exams key liye :P i only flicked thru ur book ;) and make little  paragraphs. three lines on MS word, nor more than that. then put two lines in a paragraphh, then one, then two.. understand?? 
          i mean that dont just go with three lines uniformly. be random :D have awesome insults :D write a little bit dirty, but leave the suspense. :P leave each chapter at a cliffhanger. makes it easier to begin the next chapter. focus on the plot. zyada lamba mat krna story ko. like kirsty mosely does :P *no offense to her*