Lmnopq98765

Hi , thank you for your support for my first book .
          
          
          You can check the introduction part of my second book, 
          
          Campus tales

Lmnopq98765

@Lmnopq98765  I'll try to consider all and again thanks
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Chevika_yadav

@Lmnopq98765 yeah sure I'll go through that and moreover thank you for considering the Virat one idea it means a lot and please in next part if possible let all 3 of them to be together
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Lmnopq98765

Hi needs to ask you something

Lmnopq98765

@Lmnopq98765  it's okay, thanks I'll try consider it.
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Chevika_yadav

@Lmnopq98765 See I'll suggest if you really want to introduce Virat then introduce him as someone who had secretly great powers at the underworld which is unknown to everyone this is how the fan who will get impulsive about will understand it and gonna like the power being with them
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Lmnopq98765

@Lmnopq98765  I am not sure because some of rohirat fans thora impulsive ho jate hain and virat's character would be like koi bhi impulsive ho jayega padhke
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Lmnopq98765

Thanks for your votes can I ask  you something

Lmnopq98765

@Lmnopq98765  hey it's okay I'll try to consider it
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Chevika_yadav

@Lmnopq98765  It was Genuine, Rahul and Ishan's part was cute but can't you please add something like where Ishan broke down because of ache in the chest of losing Abhi, drenched  in Rain met accident with Rahul's car, went missing Abhi and Shubman finds him with Rahul Hardik too joined them, Ishan lost his memory Doctor says don't to remind him and same time Jack come and took Mehta's name and Ishan situation get worse something like that I mean. And I am sorry if I crossed my limit and sincere apology if you don't like it it's just a suggestion it's your call to accept it or not cause Abhisan is cute
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Lmnopq98765

@Lmnopq98765 was it cute , a bit over or like genuine
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