Sehrish

Yes, I know. Sehrish is a nice character. Keep going! 
          
          :-)

Well, your sehrish is very different from me. I'm more confident and upright then embarrassing and all over the place and I don't have big boobs.  :-) 

*your

Yes,yes. 
          
          You Japanese words are fine, no need to pluck. Be careful with the spellings that's all. :-)

That's fine too. 
          " Let's eat"  in Arabic or Japanese? 
          
          I don't know much people apart from me who speaks Japanese.
          And I've never met anyone who speaks as much as I speak for that matter. So, ask me if you'd like. 

 I'm not sure what that means but normally when you eat or start anything you say "Bismillah Ir-Rahman Ir-rahim" 
          
          Thanks. ;) 

More feels to the readers I mean.

Yeah, I'm going to start the story when the three of them i.e., Evele, Ervin and Mimi who're friends live a lively and cheerful life. And then the drama starts. 
          
          So, when they get to know Ervin and then they experience his unjustified death. So, the more feels! :-)
          
          Thank you. :')
          
          But I'm very bad at beginnings...

I don't want to include any supernatural stuff. 
          I want it to be plain realistic and simply too truthful. 
          Mimi is not a bad person, but she is cruel to Evele for using him and playing with him. 
          
          Yeah, about Bell! I was going to change it. 
          
          I want to write the story as in such that I drive the reader's minds to think that what the village thinks is right. That revenge is needed. 
          I want to show them the consequences of being good. 
          Being good requires sacrifices like how Evele lost mimi. 
          Of course, Evele is the true hero but being heroes doesn't mean being happy and getting everything. 
          I want readers to realise that. :') 
          
          The dense woods, haha. You have a point though, didn't think of that. 
          
          And This is a twisted world. 
          So, Murder, insanity, goryness etc will be involved. But, more mentally than physically to show people how insanity arises, what drives people to suicide, what drives people to kill and yearn for ecstasy. 
          
          Through the end, Mimi will be a very guilty, self-redeeming character. 
          
          Haha, your ending seems funny! 
          No, I think Evele hearing the news while he's working or something would be a better shock. Don't you think? Or else it would be cheesy. 

Oh, wow. Yes! Yes. This should be set in an uncivilised period of time, quite long ago. 
          Ervin's head was laid bear on the river bridge, displayed for everyone to see. 
          I want that to be gory. 
          Now, the story is in such that I satirise on the narrow mindedness of people. The umm...so according to the law the associated persons of the murdered have the right to do the same thing to that person who committed it.  They follow the principle of what goes around, comes around. They try to be as fair as possible. And, being too fair is the irony as decisions seem brutal and unfair in the end. 
          Evele doesn't like how the villagers think. Mimi, on the other hand who was born and brought up there believes that brutality and accuracy is necessary to  acquire true justice. Pretty practical. 
          Mimi is a very strong character while Evele has too much uncertainty in his decisions and actions.