Critique

Hi could you maybe critique my story Another way? I just need some feed back, that'd be really helpful. Please.

hello :) would you mind checking out my fanfiction What If and giving me some consteuctive criticism :)
          

Hi, I'm new on Wattpad, would you critique my first story, The Dark? The only feedback I've had is from friends, so it would be SUPER helpful if you could. Many thanks!

Hello, can you please critique my story Soldier's bleed the family's blood?:) Thank you!

Would you mind critiquing one of my stories? It'd really mean a lot!!! Thanks! :)))