Dear readers, I feel that the last chapter didn't bring me too much satisfaction, so I want to hear your opinions. As Dawn was a shy girl... well, maybe because of how secluded she was and not having any friends but her mother, I don't know if her boldness of 'tripping over' suits her. Please tell me what you think about this. Also, I let her hit the floor because I am tired of reading of every 'prince charming' catching the damsels before. I wrote that with a hint of fun, but now I am having a second thought about how the chapter ended.
With all this being said, now I have to do some research on xxx :))) because... Stay close, Is getting spicy!!!