Coraidhe

Hello my dear readers, I modified and added more to the last chapter and I am in great need of opinions!
          	I need to say that I am still working on this story: I found a lot of holes and many chapters are in need of rewriting, but I will try to focus on finishing it first...
          	Please help me with more critique and reviews. If you use Inkitt, you can read it there and leave a review there, it helps a lot.
          	Thank you!

Coraidhe

Hello my dear readers, I modified and added more to the last chapter and I am in great need of opinions!
          I need to say that I am still working on this story: I found a lot of holes and many chapters are in need of rewriting, but I will try to focus on finishing it first...
          Please help me with more critique and reviews. If you use Inkitt, you can read it there and leave a review there, it helps a lot.
          Thank you!

Coraidhe

Coraidhe

Great news! On Thursday, 3th of June, I will release two new chapter! I know that the updates are slow, but this is the first time I set a date for update. I hope you will enjoy, and please don't forget to like and comment!
          Happy reading!

Coraidhe

I reworked on the prologue and I need to know if tis is better... Please let me know what you think and if is good or not. Thank you!

Coraidhe

@EmTay93 aww thx. but i need to rewrite the last chapter. Because it s crap :))
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emtaywrites

@Coraidhe I don't mind at all! You scratch my back and I'll scratch yours ;) lol
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Coraidhe

@EmTay93  every bit of help is much appreciated, but you don t have to, I tried to help you without expecting for the favor to be returned :)
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Coraidhe

Dear readers, I feel that the last chapter didn't bring me too much satisfaction, so I want to hear your opinions. As Dawn was a shy girl... well, maybe because of how secluded she was and not having any friends but her mother, I don't know if her boldness of 'tripping over' suits her.  Please tell me what you think about this. Also, I let her hit the floor because I am tired of reading of every 'prince charming' catching the damsels before. I wrote that with a hint of fun, but now I am having a second thought about how the chapter ended.
          With all this being said, now I have to do some research on xxx  :))) because... Stay close, Is getting spicy!!!