just_COCK_it

Being completely honest “His beautiful obsession” Is good but there are a couple of things that I don’t like about it,
          
          1) all the dialogue is in one paragraph. Its one times hard to keep track where I am.
          
          2) the use of words; is it hard to use “stupid” instead of “Baka” ? It’s one thing that really made me think about dropping the book.
          
          3) character dialogue, when using quotations I think it’s better to make a new line for them, that way it would be better to know who is talking or not.
          
          4) when are you going to update? I’ll be waiting for the next chapters
          

Castriofer

Hello author! Im wondering why havent you updated any of your books? Especially the "reincarnated as the side villain" I am deeply inlove with that Im hoping Idris have a happy ending even if his kinda.. of a red flag? And the villainess too!! Shes so cool! I also hate bugs either way I hope your doing fine author we readers will wait for you! Hopefully you come back... 

Sabby232622

Hell author, I hopr you're ookay
           It's almost a year since you updated reincarnated as a side villain. I really hope you'll uodate soon. I know school is hard but you can do it, a little notif about how you won't update for a long time is enough for me as long as you're okay.