Creepy111805

@ultimate_detective I only read the first chaptet. I thought it was really good the thing that you need to work on is putting some more history behind things. Also put like the five senses I hope you know what I mean..like the smell, sight...stuff like that. Otherwise I thought your book(or chapter) so far is pretty good! 

Flowerpenguin123

Omg hey!

Flowerpenguin123

@Creepy111805   Yea sorry it's kinda late right now but u know that's how I roll
            I sound so dumb
Reply

Creepy111805

@Flowerpenguin123 "oh sorry I haven't been on it in a long time" haha, hey 
Reply

IsabelFilippone

Hello thank you so much for following me if you have any extra time please check out my story Unilluminated, it would mean a lot.

Creepy111805

@IsabelFilippone Thank You! for following me. And sure I will definitely check out your book
Reply

Creepy111805

@ultimate_detective I only read the first chaptet. I thought it was really good the thing that you need to work on is putting some more history behind things. Also put like the five senses I hope you know what I mean..like the smell, sight...stuff like that. Otherwise I thought your book(or chapter) so far is pretty good! 

ultimate_detective

Hello! I need help on my book. It's called Destruction of Hope. Could you check it out and give me your advice?

Creepy111805

@ultimate_detective hey sorry I haven't said anything I was very busy today...I will tell you tomorrow
Reply