@ultimate_detective I only read the first chaptet. I thought it was really good the thing that you need to work on is putting some more history behind things. Also put like the five senses I hope you know what I mean..like the smell, sight...stuff like that. Otherwise I thought your book(or chapter) so far is pretty good!
@ultimate_detective I only read the first chaptet. I thought it was really good the thing that you need to work on is putting some more history behind things. Also put like the five senses I hope you know what I mean..like the smell, sight...stuff like that. Otherwise I thought your book(or chapter) so far is pretty good!