CyeusMadrid

Hello guys, nawa'y patuloy nyo po akong suportahan bilang manunulat. Suportahan po natin ang bagong kwento na aking sinusulat sa kasalukuyan. KAIN at ABEL #887 in Romance. Thanks guys.

mykelabiyo

pero panghahawakan na tlaga ni caloy ung sabi ni aj na wla syang nararamdaman para k caloy at mgkakaroon na ng closure. then ipapakita ni caloy na sila na ni patrick at babalik ulit si aj sa kanya at mgtatanong kung wla na bang pag-asang maging sila o wla na bang nararamdaman si caloy para sa kanya at this time, si caloy naman ang mgsasabo sa kanya na, lets just call it.. change of hearts. hahah! boom ! =)
          gantihan! =)

mykelabiyo

hi cyeus! =)
          mangi-ngialam ulit. hahah! 
          kulang pa ung mga sinabi ni caloy.
          hndi pa nya naisumbat ung tungkol sa sing sing at change of hearts.
          pero parang mas mganda pg eeksena ulit si mads at si aya. kumbaga ay narinig pala ni aya lahat ng kumprontasyon nila. heheheh =)

mykelabiyo

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          hindi lng pala si Caloy ang may bumabagabag na ktanungan sa isipan na (PAANO KO SASABIHIN?)
           to cut this short, gusto maging silang tatlo. =) hahahah! 
          kse Aj cant live without Caloy, caloy cant live without patrick, and Aj and Patrick must learn to accept each other in order no to lose Caloy. =)
          coz Caloy cant chose between them for he already love them equally. =) 
           
          ung love, d lng naman para sa dalawang ktao lng. =)

mykelabiyo

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          ngunit, biglang sisingit si Mads at ibubuko ung rason kung bakit sila nag break ni AJ noon at hihikayatin si AJ na wag nang itago at pigilan pa ang tunay nyang nararamdaman para k Caloy at lingid sa kaalaman ni AJ, naririning pala nila Caloy, Kyleen, Mia at Aya ung pinag uusapan nila dahil sinet up na pala lahat ni Mads dahil hangad dn nito ang kaligayahan ni AJ.

CyeusMadrid

@mykelabiyo you have the idea of whats going to happen pero it will not be executed that way. Kasi as I was writing the characters, i am mastering their principles beliefs and attitude. I cant just make them jump into something that they are not without introducing scenes or events. So it will be realistic to readers that the change on characters behavior is possible.
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mykelabiyo

okay. =) excited to read ur version. hahahah! =)
            naisip qlng naman yan bgla. ^_~ V
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CyeusMadrid

@mykelabiyo that would be nice. But i already have a plot for this stories til the end.
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mykelabiyo

hi cyeus! 
          
          01. 
          just a suggestion, maganda sana if d masayang ung role ni Patrick at AJ.
          akala q nga is si Patrick ung mgtatapat in behalf of Caloy at babale walain ni AJ at pabulaan na tlagang parang kpatid lng ung turing nya kay Caloy at Ipagtatapat dn ni Patrick kung ano si Caloy para sa kanya.

CyeusMadrid

@mykelabiyo hi. Thanks for that. Nasaang chapter ka na ba? Hehe. Hindi naman masasayang ang characters na yon. Kasi main characters sila. :)
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