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I guess I suck at writing a romance scene. I have been trying for weeks, and this is not even an actual romantic scene. I just wanna show my MCs have feelings that they haven't confessed to one another.
Not much just a simple convo, but no matter what I do, it either feels too exaggerated or not the feeling I want to have there.
I donno...
It kind of feels funny to me, not the butterflies that came to my mind while I wrote it.
But the story I am writing needs this, well the initial idea didn't need romance when I thought as a short story. But when I developed it, it needed this too. Now I can't remove it, because that fulfills how I have pictured this. And honestly I like the story how it goes, except for the way I am expressing things in my chap 5 (haven't published it yet)
One side of my head tells, it is because you read it and modified it already several times you are not feeling it.
Another side says You suck at it. Just give up on it. You're spoiling it.