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ssupizel

@Deewanixwriters Yayayayay Ty diiii
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Irahqureshi

Hello there, I just wana say that as a Muslim it is very important for us to be buried not burned....I am not saying to just change the scene, it might change the plot so I just request you in future just remember this main details about the Muslims....and sorry if I sound rude to you.....by the way you write really well....

Irahqureshi

@Irahqureshi I appreciate it....
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Deewanixwriters

@Irahqureshi I know bhaii...Mujhe sab pata hai what and why I am writing..and I understand your concern but aisa nhi hai ki mujhe pata hi nhi about other religion. Plot ke liye jo important hoga mai wahi krungi but I will also make sure than nothing goes against any religion 
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umeandu

Hi I am very very upset , not because someone died or someone lost their love or beacause of the climax but but because no matter how much the operation is sensitive or top secret the real matreyard soldier identity is never hidden , never ever atleast from his family or wife  .
          Indian army cares for their soldier deeply. They will never hide the identity of the real matreyard soldier atleast from their family they maybe hide from media or reporter BUT NEVER THEIR FAMILY , they may not inform in public but atleast in private they are informed.  There are no exception to it. Even  the most elite , most secretive unit follow this protocol . THEY ARE NEVER KEPT IN DARK . 
          I myself belonging to a army commmitee family is truly upset from this .
          Because nobody has seen their dad's driver been killed by bullet , their dad being shot , their dad cross borders but a family of the soldier  .
          AND A SACRIFICE IS A SACRIFICE.  And let me tell you it's illegal to hide the matreyard solider name atleast to their family. 
          I understand that you have said it's going to be unrealistic but I wanted to share something which really really hurtful . Army families already lives with uncertainty atleast they deserve truth and honesty real life or fiction .
          
          I respect your creativity,  but this particular part is something that really hurtful and disrespectful. 
          It's clear misinterpretation of how army work .
          I know you wouldn't do that intentionly but I personally feel it's very disrespectful to those who have lived this reality .
          

Deewanixwriters

@umeandu yeah Ik ❤️❤️
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umeandu

@Deewanixwriters thank you for acknowledging.  I completely understand you have planned the story , but just to clarify my intention was never to judge . I pointed it out because it is something very sensitive 
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Awlla123

@Deewanixwriters  plsss plss author kuch bhi Karo parr zyaan ko kuch matt karna zyaan aur zainishi ko  happy ending denaa plsss bohot bharosa hhh aaap pe plss authorr
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