O hey
Basic writing tips every beginner should understand 

1. Don't use script writing. It makes you look like a 9 year old trying to write a story 

2. Don't use Y/N. Whenever I see it, I'm constantly reminded that what I'm reading is not my adventure, but an adventure someone wrote out for me. (What I mean is that (Y/N) ruins the immersion, and reading is like an adventure for me) 

3. Don't add images to your story, makes you look like an 8 year old instead. Lazy and insincere. 

4. Just make some OC's for the love of god 

Disregard all these tips if you're just writing a parody.