Bottleneckedinlife

Man, I finally saw "The Writer's Poorly Disguised Fetish" episode within one of your stories. Your Camula x Male Reader was going so well, and then BAM! Tickle Torture and just to finish, out of nowhere, the reader is a foot enjoyer, with no hints throughout the story. 
          
          At the very least, leave it clear in the beginning that you are writing a story with one of the most boring fetishes of all time before baiting me into reading one of your stories.

Dragondudde2

@Bottleneckedinlife Thank you.  And if it's not to your liking, anyway, that's fine, too.
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Bottleneckedinlife

@Dragondudde2 I'll be frank, I only read about 1/3 of the prologue before going but yeah, I noticed this focus. I'll go back on it later but I promise you, I'm going in with an open mind this time.
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Dragondudde2

@Bottleneckedinlife Apology accepted, man.  TBH, you're right about one thing.  When it comes to my fetish, I'm about as subtle as a charging bull.  But, if you've read my Ishizu Ishtar x Male Reader story, you'd see it's more story focused than fetish focused.
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Zer1on

Hiya^^! Just wanting to ask: As one Wattpad creator to another, would there any advice or tips you could give to help improve a story? I write some Yu-Gi-Oh stuff as well and I'm worried about making my stuff too repetitive and bland/tasteless for my readers.

Dragondudde2

@Zer1on Hmm.  Well, try looking for some good reference material.  And it couldn't hurt to ask others for ideas, either.
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