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souls_fan

@Ediros1 the writing in both is great, the world building definitely improved a lot
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Ediros1

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@souls_fan I would say I am less shit at writing than a few years ago. ;)
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souls_fan

@Ediros1 nice, i cant wait for more chapters btw, i just was on ff.net and read the legacy version of the story, tbh you are very great at writing
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CookieNoMilk

I really love how you tackled Rias in your book. Most fics usually portray her as a stuck up bitch so it's refreshing to see her written in a different light, and especially the perspective of Akeno, Kiba and Koneko's recruitment. They were in a pretty bad circumstance and were in a desperate state. 

Ediros1

@CookieNoMilk 
            
            I am trying to keep everyone fair and smart. Their characters are as close to the canon as possible. Rias isn't perfect, but she isn't evil either? And Issei? Issei probably makes her regret her life choices.
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