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Hey! Tankology here. Could you please read my book, I just recently published it and need someone to read and comment about it... Thanks

So it says that the name is what ever it says on mine I don't know if it shows different on your screen but the name of the book is Leah Fray or should be I would appreciate comments on what I could still do better

I am going to edit and ad more but for now it is the end of the book till I edit the chapters and make them longer

So I think that chapter twelve picked up a bit and was better what a bought you guys?

So thank you for showing support pand looking at it and i

So I think I have improved on the7th and8th chapters 

So this is my first book I have ever been writing so if you would please read and make comments on what I should work on