So, I read some of Protect Me.
I have to say, it was really good. I loved how you used the depths of the characters to enhance the story. The storyline was good and not overdone.
One thing I would say is to double check paragraphing, and maybe to try and use more impact, just to build tension etc.
once again, it was a great read and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for asking me to review it :3
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