EnvyAzazel

Update 2: And One Hour Later, I've updated everything on Wattpad. For AO3 users, that'll be done later but to sum it up, the name change was for the main MC. I kept the name Kuzuku because I felt it'd be nostalgic and pays homage to my original version. Though, I've grown out of it and decided to change the name to Shikuro as it rolls off the tongue better and sounds better imo. On another note I added the finished and reviewed Arc 2 C4 as well so here's a link. 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1466447989-super-dragon-ball-redux-kaizen-arc-2-c4

Antgar1305

But I would like to ask would you at least add some influence from this new version of ssj4 from daima to his ssj4 itself maybe do it when 21 learns how to use demonic magic and she tries to help by doing something similar to what neva did

EnvyAzazel

@Antgar1305  After some time reviewing my notes, I most likely not for several reasons. 
            
            1) (The main reason): Part of the reason why Shikuro goes down that route is because of symbolism in how the original was achieved. That and it'd make no sense for Miroe to learn demon magic at that point without it feeling like it comes out of no where. 
            
            2): For the media transformations from 1-4, I prefer to keep things accurate to how they are presented. So when it comes to which method I use in my AU, I'd want to be consistent. Since I'm using GT's iteration, I'd rather use GT's design and iteration instead.
            
            3): Again, after like arc 4 or 5, the canon transformations will be scrapped into something new that I cooked up. Everything I do before that is to build up to that point and it'll open the door to what I ultimately have plan post Arc 4 and 5. As I said, Shikuro has something unique to him and has been already implied that he wasn't normal to begin with. As for what that is, there are sneaks images but no explanation as of yet. So no spoilers.
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Antgar1305

First have you seen the newest episode of daim and if what do of the new interpretation of new form But if I may ask would it interesting if kuzuku could get that form but instead of it being a namekian it could with android 21 help he gets it

EnvyAzazel

@Antgar1305 Forgot to mention this but my bad. Kuzuku's name has been changed to Shikuro. Silly me.
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EnvyAzazel

@Antgar1305 I have and kind of have mixed feelings on it. Granted, appearance aside, its not confirmed to be the "SSJ4 Canonized". DB has many instances where forms are similar in appearance but don't differ much from each other. I'd wait till Daima provides a full explanation on what that form is before jumping the gun. At the very least, it could be a variant like how there is a Super Saiyan C-Type and etc. 
            
            As far as Kuzuku is concern. Didn't really express this much but Kuzuku wouldn't be getting that version and will stick with the original as intended. The Redux Kaizen universe is a AU and has events different from the canon. That and as showed in the sneaks, Kuzuku's will get something not just unique but personal to him.
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EnvyAzazel

Update 2: And One Hour Later, I've updated everything on Wattpad. For AO3 users, that'll be done later but to sum it up, the name change was for the main MC. I kept the name Kuzuku because I felt it'd be nostalgic and pays homage to my original version. Though, I've grown out of it and decided to change the name to Shikuro as it rolls off the tongue better and sounds better imo. On another note I added the finished and reviewed Arc 2 C4 as well so here's a link. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1466447989-super-dragon-ball-redux-kaizen-arc-2-c4

EnvyAzazel

Upadate: A bit of a delay but had to pause my review/editting process a bit as I realized the Wattpad version was more updated in Arc 1 compared to AO3's version. So I'm taking time to make sure both versions are the exact same before proceeding. That, and I'm doing a name change as well (Doesn't take long, trust me). It'll be pretty obvious who it is once everything is updated.

EnvyAzazel

A bit late but want to wish everyone a Happy New Years. Sorry for going a bit radio silent. I wanted to spend my Christmas Week and New Years with family and friends so I took a break from writing for a bit. But best believe, chapter this week.

EnvyAzazel

Just a small question to my readers. Arc 2 is pretty much done. Got I'd say 2 drafts to type + Editing, re-reading and blah blah blah. Yah know, the writers process. However, I did NOT expect it to be THIS LONG. Like I intended it to be the same amount as Arc 1. I think I overdid this one but there was so much needed to be established early on in the story in between actually completing his first mission for story-telling. So in short, I think I got like. . .20+ chapters to re-read and edit LOL. Now that's a pain to me which means I can guess that's a PAIN to you guys trying to read 20+ chapters when I drop the entirety of Arc 2. I guess the good news is, that I have a LOT stocked up and ready. My question to you guys is:
          
          1) Do you want me to edit ALL of them and drop everything at once?
          
          2) Edit/Review Drafts one by one and drop them once completed? Potentially on a WEEKLY SCHEDULE.
          
          For further context, each chapter is 5k or more words as well.

JasperKai

@EnvyAzazel Option 2 seems better for your health man. 20+ 5k or more words chapters is actually bonkers. At least you have a good stock going for you to keep up the updates xD.
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marcusjeva

Hey what's going to happen to your Yu-Gi-Oh story

EnvyAzazel

@marcusjeva At the moment it's postpone/ going to go through a small rewrite. The reason is because Yugioh fics like that take longer to write due to the dueling aspect (I'm aiming for Yugioh Fifth Factor quality so yeah). That and the storyline of that fic doesn't follow any Canon story plot so mostly everything aside from certain legacy characters were made from scratch. I plan to resume it only AFTER the Dragon Ball fic is completely done and rewritten but I haven't abandon it. In fact I work on notes and cards on the side as well from time to time such as rewriting the Nexus deck's play style to standout better.
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