Sarah Shand

@CynthiaVarady and thank you for sharing that story. It's was a fun read. Loved how all those nursery rhyme characters were included in throughout the story. 

@LemuelMcMillan I'm looking forward to reading more of the series when they come out (I'm guessing that there will be a confrontation with Lord Scorpion and Spider somewhere down the line. And it will be epic... No pressure ) 

@Drunken-Shifu hi there!

@FairSair6 Thank you for the feedback! I’m going to go through eventually and put the Latin terms in the relevant comments, just to keep it all nice and neat! At the moment I’m focusing more on the story just to get it out of my head, but I’ll definitely be doing that, as accessibility to classical history is something that I’m very passionate about!

@magicianhatmatt so far it seems good. I've always been interested in history (especially ancient history) but a majority of historical fiction that I've read that takes place in ancient times haven't been well written. I hope the rest of your story goes well. Just a small. Suggestion (not sure if it's in the rest of the chapters), it will be good if you could put the meaning of the roman/Latin words used at the end of the chapters. 

@LemuelMcMillan it's a bit different to what I usually read, but I still found it enjoyable and am intrigued by the trio Spider, Renegade and Raven. I like how there are hints about their pasts, keeps me wanting to read more to find out how they came to be. I have the other Eagle X stories in my to be read lost (so many stories and not enough time to read them) 

@-NikaRave- I did notice and I thank you and Lady Anika for the mention and the work you both put in to produce work of such high quality. I look forward to the next set of stories in the series. 

@FairSair6 I'm so glad you think so! :)

@MarCafeWrites thank you for sharing your story. It was fun read