Hey I just read ur book and it's rlly good u should not worry about what people say if writing this book is what u want to do don't let anyone stop u and so what if there are little errors that need to be fixed thoses error make up what is a writer.
you could make it a little cliche wih sluts an shit but also you could write how she gets bullied but takes it and her mat doesnt know until he like walks in on the bulling and shit like that in the middle or something she has pups/babies and so forth than they get married an live happily ever after and I lov ou story its really good dont worry about hat people say k caint wait for u to update