PetGriggory

Hello my friend, i really love Transformers One fanfic.
          But there a lot of errors and skips since you writing this storyline only by memories.
          I highly recommend to rewatch the movie fully just in case. And then you can rewrite some chapters if not a full book.

PetGriggory

@FrozenKnee1234
            I really hope that it will help you somehow.
            And you're welcome my friend.
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FrozenKnee1234

@PetGriggory yes I will do that thank you :D
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PetGriggory

Here this fanfic
            "Transformers One: Siren"
            https://archiveofourown.org/works/59219641/chapters/151014229
            Maybe it will help you with some chapters.
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