GabiGeranium
Gonna post a new chapter for I Promise To Love You Tomorrow really really soon! I'm so excited.
GabiGeranium
whatthefefe
Hey there! I'm so sorry, haven't been able to keep up with your novel since I haven't been on wattpad in 3 months! I had my gcse exams and all. So, what did I miss? I hope you haven't given up on your novel. Btw is that you in your display picture, if so you are really pretty :)
whatthefefe
@GabiGeranium Hahaha, I get it completely :) Good luck with your exams and I can't wait for chapter 10 then! And you're welcome gorgeous ^_^
GabiGeranium
@whatthefefe Hey! I'm not sure if you did miss out anything since the last time I updated was about 3 months ago. I finished on chapter 9. I haven't quite given up, but I'm realising that there are things about the previous chapters that I would like to change, which makes writing new chapters difficult. I've got exams coming up too, which is also part of the reason I haven't been writing much. My exams end in June so i think you can expect a new chapter by the beginning of July. I know that's really far away, sorry about that. Hehe, that is me, thank you ^_^
xCreativeGirlLx
hi!!
CheriRenee
Hi Gabi, Thanks for voting for Trust. I read your profile and want to tell you that I also loved the Secret Garden, and happen to live in an Edwardian home in San Francisco. I have recently learned a bit about Warsaw and must say -- You have much to be proud of about Poland. Happy New Year!
GabiGeranium
@CheriRenee You're welcome! It's a really great beginning and I'm sure to read more soon. I bet your house is beautiful. Thank you, I feel very lucky to have lived there, and certainly have some of my best memories there. Happy New Year!
whatthefefe
Hey! Have you updated your novel? Haven't heard about it for ages!
GabiGeranium
@whatthefefe actually... thinking about it... you may not have read chapter 9 which I posted about a month ago or so...
GabiGeranium
@whatthefefe no, unfortunately not, I've been a bit busy with another project and then schoolwork. My computer also decided to delete like half a chapter which was really demotivating. I'm looking to get back to writing that novel soon though, and I'm so glad you're still interested in reading it, it really inspiring for me. I will update you when I publish another chapter.
samuelshouseofart
my collection 23... is out now it's a great piece of poetry to read over the holidays.!.
samuelshouseofart
it would be truly humbling if you could check my poetry out your feed back would be greatly appreciated.
Starryknight2010
Thanks for the follow as well, Gabi!
CassidySavidi
So now that I've fnished 21 Brook Street I think you need a better teaser. The first line works but the second doesn't really fit. There aren't three men, really. Two men at most. But, really it's all about one man and the two boys that can't replace him. I think you like the numbers 3,2,1 but it's all really one narrative (just two voices). I've seen the lyricism in your writing and think you can get a much more evocative teaser. Especially now that your story is finished. That teaser is sometimes what makes a reader curious enough to start or wary enough to just save it for later and never read. Also, the teaser should hint at the sadness of the story so they know their heart is about to break.
GabiGeranium
@CassidySavidi You're right. I hate writing teasers, I never know what to write , but I'll work on it and hopefully improve it! Thank you for your feedback.
GabiGeranium
Got an actually complete short story for you all coming up very soon!