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Thank you so much for following me. please read my story Destined to Collide. You can read under the microscope too if you want but it's really long. Destined to Collide is what I'm writing currently. Please vote and comment and share with others.

Hey, all! 
          
          I don't know how many people read these things, but I'm trying to be more active on my message board and I wanted you're opinion on a current book I'm reading.
          
          This is a short amount of the first chapter, and I wanted to ask you all what you thought? Honest opinions about the writing style and quality are welcome!
          
          "A low rumble interrupted the tranquillity, streaks of raindrops starting to come down, stitching my clothes onto my body. I sighed, almost like a child whining, what wastes of spaces, I thought. Cowering in fear and slithering into the nearest shadow, the old friend stared at me. I grinned, I can't believe he’s scared, though it was barely heard over the thunder, I smiled at the words in my mind. “What a sight.. Do you admit it now?” I questioned him, my chest tight with an emotion I’d been feeling a lot the past few years. He shook his head rapidly, still denying the obvious truth. I pulled a knife out, I would have used a gun, but I wanted it to be painful. “You fucking hurt me, Eric.” I told him, he gulped at the laugh that came out of my mouth when I noticed the rapid movements he took away from me. Walking closer, I knelt to the ground, looking him square in the eyes. ‘I have to do this, I'm sorry.’ I grazed his cheek with the kitchen knife, the only knife I'd found as a last resort. Finally, after a few minutes of teasing, I pressed harder on his arms. The blood seemed to stain his skin, the same body I had yearned for as a teenager. Next, hatefully and without remorse, I stabbed the knife fully through his chest; I dug the knife right in, his shallow breathing the only sound as the world went dead silent. His blood running down my arms felt seraphic; like heaven had finally let me in. Though, once the deed was done, I had felt much worse."
          
          And, what's your favourite type of story? Villains and Heroes? LGBTQ+ Romance?

(I'm sorry, I know nobody cares, especially since I don't even know you guys. But I need to put this somewhere, I figured nobody would give me say anything, and uhm, just continue with your lives!)
          
          I used to believe I would be sent to hell if I died.
          
          I still do. But now it's different. 
          Now I know that I'm already in hell, so when I get sent below, it can't get much worse. 
          
          You make me spend the eternity of my afterlife in my memories? I'm going to feel the exact same thing I've felt my entire life. 
          
          And eventually, that god everyone believes loves us all and wants the best for us, they will ruin me. They will make me numb, I'm already beginning to feel it.
          
          "I can't stop thinking about you. Like, I mentally and physically cannot pound my head hard enough to not think about how I will never see you again. What makes it worse is how they are so much like you. They could almost me your children, your fur is very much alike." 

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Hi, thanks for following me! ♡⸜(˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)⸝♡

Hey loving your book. And Missy, she's feisty. I like her. Can't wait to read more.
          
          Also, if you don't mind could you check out my book sometime? It's an ongoing BxB Teenfic that I think you'll love.