Katherine Westfall

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Hey there I just read the 2 first chapters of your book and I love them would you like to read mine ONE SIDED CRUSH please and comment it and vote it if you want of course hihi anyways 
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Hi! Hahah i was reading the possesuve player wants me for so ling! hookedddd xD:) If you dont mind, could you check out my story, “The therapist?” It would mean the absolute world to me. However, if you dont want to, thats perfectly okay! 

Hey  Made an Edit for Possesive player....want to Share it...Hope you Like! 

Hey u messaged me earlier but I had read only one chapter of the book so thought it would be unfair of me  give fake reviews for yur hardwork.I have completed the book the player wants me, to be honest I loved the story. I really appreciate your efforts for writing such awesome stories for readers like me who only read. Keep writing awesome books!!. 

Part 2
           (continues off of Issue #1) For trust is easily broken but very hard to earn back. Tbh only way I can see this making sense is making Eli like Ariana in the sense that she a follower of the school's "fabulous" Queen B. Idea for this you could have it later be revealed that it was b/c of the Queen B that Hayley committed suicide 
          (Second issue) Ok so you had Eli basically claim Drew for herself after this you don't build off of it you sorta just leave it there and forget about it. In chp 11 u had Eli and Alec making out half naked. Like I understand she a slut and all but after this she gets this crush on Alec all of a sudden, it was only 4 chapters ago that she was telling Lizzie to stay away from Drew and that he is "mine" (Eli's) Like I said previously you didn't build off of this in the following chapter you sorta put off to the side and kinda of forget about it. What she stated was pretty serious and it was a threat as well. Like I stated in the previous paragraph it would make form more sense (in my viewpoint) to have another character play the role of Queen B 
          
          Don't get me wrong I like this book but for me it is simply progessing way to fast after chapter 10. There just to simply to many gaps that are making me scratch my head and wonder did I jump ahead or miss something big?

Ok I got kinda of big message to big to fit into 1 post. 
          I WANT TO MAKE IT CLEAR THIS NOT ME HATING THIS JUST ME VOICING MY OPINION.
          
          Part 1:
          The Possessive Player Wants Me I really the book but, I having at least 2 major issues here 
          It has to do with the flow of your book. Like it was flowing nicely up until the Worst Sleepover Ever With Friends (which is chp 10) after that it just took off way to fast. You had Eli saying on chp 7, "But let me get [something] straight [here], Drew is mine. Don't you dare make a move on him."  This is followed by Eli beating the shit out of her b/c Lizzie doesn't want to risk the consequence that would come shortly after. So instead of clashing heads at this sleepover they actually get along like friends. No bickering or cat-fight. Just 2 people hanging out with their friends. 
          
          (Frist issue) First and foremost I like what your trying to do here with Eli and Lizzie 2 best friends who lost a close/best friend (named Hayley) to both of them and how each of them took losing her differently. Again I like but for me it just to sudden and non-realistic when Lizzie tells Eli, she is forgiven for what she did. Firstly didn't this tragedy take place sometime in middle school and with the setting being at a highschool, that is at the very least 3 years of getting beat up, humiliated and only god knows what she did to Lizzie all done by her ex-best friend. She forgiven just like that no major event like almost losing, for example, Lizzie or someone close to both of them like Jack. I like the concept but there was no build up to it, it  just simply fell out of the blue. Plus I don't really like the whole BBF with her (Eli) it's just too confusing/non-realistic.  Like you can't just simple go from being a complete dick to BBFs it takes time to rebuild those bonds of friendship they can't simple appear out thin area like that. 

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