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Please donate a read to my brown book... Please...

Thanks for the follow! :)

Hi, just wanted to stop by and say thank you for all your support in my book :) Yeah, it might be a simple gesture of kindness but for me...yeah, it means a whole lot than that XD just thank you very much, I hope you continue to enjoy my work. Wishing you all the best!!!

I'm crying bec. Of @CuteQueen33 and her book!!!! Nyooooohohohohohohohohohohoooooooo!!!

Hey!!! If you like you can check out my story- Who Are You- it only got a few chapters but lemme know what you think 

Thank you for adding Since When to your reading list! I really appreciate the votes and comments. I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

Thank you for your votes and comments!! Much appreciated!!! 

Thanks for the vote!! :)

Well, if you enjoyed the kind of advice I gave Scavinger I would suggest you read WoP Quest.
          
          I mean, the version on Wattpad is the raw, unrefined version of WoP Quest, but at least it's free. Heh. If I let people read the edited, ready-to-print version I'd be bankrupting myself.
          
          I'm not sure what kind of advice you're looking for, and I don't know what kind of advice would benefit your story the most. So the only thing I can say is this :
          
          I suggest you give WoP Quest a go, look & read it carefully, break down the story elements I used and examine how I made the pieces blend & come together.
          
          There's no such thing as a subpar or lousy element in storywriting - There're only misused ones. Themes that are light & ridiculous fit children stories better, themes that are darker and more sombre fit adult novels better. In the end, it's what the writer makes of it and how they use it.
          
          You simply need to compare what you understand from my own story, and gain the experience in breaking the elements down. Once you do, you can critique your own work objectively as well.