ISimonkaaaI

Hey everyone! If you've had a chance to read Cold Shot, I just wanted to apologize if some of the sentences seem a little off or not quite right. English isn't my first language, and I rely on the help of my friends from places like Canada, the US, and other English-speaking countries to improve my phrasing and word choices. I also sometimes use a translator when I’m really stuck!  That being said, I'm working on revising the phrasing and making things sound better, but it’s a slow process since I don’t have a lot of time.... I know my English might not be perfect, and I used to rely on words "like" a lot. And also for example, instead of saying "he was outside my dorm room, standing there with his hands in his pockets," I might write "he was standing there. His hands in the pockets." I’m working on improving that too. I’m not a professional writer - I write for fun, just as a hobby for people like you to enjoy. So, I really appreciate your time and feedback on how I can get better. After all, how can I improve if I don't hear from you? Thanks so much! ❤️

vscider

Woah, I’m reading Shattered and never would have guessed English wasn’t your first language. Your writing is brilliant! The only thing I noticed was a lack of contractions, but since Rhett thrives on control and Avery has been controlled all her life, I thought that was an intentional writing decision.
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sunflowerdarling_55

@ISimonkaaaI Your writing has only improved from your previous books, you have a lot of potential and you are realizing it right now. I can't wait to see you progress and do amazing things. I fully believe that you will lift off from this platform and make a name for yourself <3
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bammm1094

@ISimonkaaaI Hi! I just finished reading the Cold Shot, and thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was so good, that I binged it in like a day, and I could not make myself put it down! :)
          	  - if you ever need any help, feel free to reach out!
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Episodefever

Namaste friends! If you enjoy stories that tug your heart one moment and tickle your ribs the next, please give my book a chance. Your support is the little diya that keeps this writer’s world glowing. Read it, share it, bless it—and bless me too, from the bottom of mine.
          
          
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