ISimonkaaaI

Hey everyone! If you've had a chance to read Cold Shot, I just wanted to apologize if some of the sentences seem a little off or not quite right. English isn't my first language, and I rely on the help of my friends from places like Canada, the US, and other English-speaking countries to improve my phrasing and word choices. I also sometimes use a translator when I’m really stuck!  That being said, I'm working on revising the phrasing and making things sound better, but it’s a slow process since I don’t have a lot of time.... I know my English might not be perfect, and I used to rely on words "like" a lot. And also for example, instead of saying "he was outside my dorm room, standing there with his hands in his pockets," I might write "he was standing there. His hands in the pockets." I’m working on improving that too. I’m not a professional writer - I write for fun, just as a hobby for people like you to enjoy. So, I really appreciate your time and feedback on how I can get better. After all, how can I improve if I don't hear from you? Thanks so much! ❤️

AuthorFSapphire

@ISimonkaaaI Hi
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ISimonkaaaI

Thank you so much cuties ❤️
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sarcasticwinger

@ISimonkaaaI its been on my TBR for a few days now, the short bit I read was wonderfully written!! I cant wait to read more!!
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lillywritesx

Hi! I know this is your space, so apologies if I’m overstepping by posting here. I’m a new writer and recently started a short story collection called Yaadein. It’s a mix of romance, drama, and emotional moments that I think fellow readers might enjoy.
          
          If you’re interested, I’d love for you to give it a chance 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/399287595?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=lillywritesx

Mellowbellow

Hi. can someone please explain to me if Door room 214 is related to both Cold shot and Chaos and control ? In the beginning of the door room 214 Kaylee has mentioned her parents met and fell in love at the same university she is studying at.