ISimonkaaaI

Hey guys! If any of you are reading Shattered, could you please tell me what you think of it so far?
          	I'm having one of those moments where, despite having reread it countless times, I still can't tell if it actually makes sense or if I'm just overthinking. My brain gets kind of chaotic when I write, and now I'm stuck on the next chapter because I keep second-guessing everything.
          	If you have a minute, please let me know what you're enjoying and if anything feels confusing, wrong, excessive or insufficient. I'd really appreciate it ❤️

Bsaria3645

@ISimonkaaaI no you're so right....I read one book and they went from enemies to officially together in like 5 chapters. It was cringe. And don't be sorry! Your book is great! I'm just anxious to see the softer side of Rhett and the more trusting less guarded side of Avery
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ISimonkaaaI

@Bsaria3645 Thank you, and sorry if it feels like dragging on. I just know that in some books they can go from enemies to something softer in a few chapters, and it never feels completely natural to me.
          	  So I decided to take my time with it, especially when it comes to feelings, and especially from his side, because he's not the kind of guy who gets there easily or accept it quickly.
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ISimonkaaaI

@vscider Thank you. Right now, I'm focusing on developing their relationship properly, so that when Rhett gets over himself, it will feel authentic and earned, and you will understand exactly why and when it happens.
          	  I hope I've explained properly his need to stay in control and how he deals with his feelings and attachments. 
          	  Avery's mom is going to show up soon. I've already drafted a chapter and have a clear idea of what I want to happen, so when she appears, let me know what you think. She's a bitch lol, sorry, but she really is. She's going to change the entire dynamic. That's all I'm saying for now heh.
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mylifeasabookbitch

Hey, I just read Cold Shot and Chaos & Control over the last few days and I think you deserve a praise for them, so thank you. The characters are amazing, I loved how the girls actually had characters, doesn't happen often enough, sadly, and I absolutely enjoyed every second of reading them. I can't wait to read more of your work. Hope you have a wonderful week. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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