IconnuRussell

The entire first chapter has been written, 16 sub chapters in all, and I have bits and pieces further down the line for both chapter two and three written.  I am continuing to work on structuring the plot as I proceed into the next stage of the story and as I do so will slowly post each sub chapter to read and review.
          	
          	Any suggestions/comments/questions are welcome!

IconnuRussell

The entire first chapter has been written, 16 sub chapters in all, and I have bits and pieces further down the line for both chapter two and three written.  I am continuing to work on structuring the plot as I proceed into the next stage of the story and as I do so will slowly post each sub chapter to read and review.
          
          Any suggestions/comments/questions are welcome!

IconnuRussell

Not a problem, I'm still finishing reading my friend's book "The Unreachable" that she listed here originally but your writing sounded too good to pass up!  Maybe at some point in between working, reading three books, writing and sleeping for small pockets of time I'll be able to post what I've written so far.  I'm still learning about Wattpad!

TLDorian

@IconnuRussell Great idea to get a few reads first and some honest feedback. Good luck getting all that done in amongst everything else!
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IconnuRussell

@TLDorian Wonderful.  I am having a few friends be Beta Readers for the first act of my novel but will post it here.  I barely have time to breathe so far working two jobs and writing and reading and small amounts of sleep but I will get to posting I swear!  :D
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TLDorian

I'm still learning too- don't forget to click on the Reply icon when you get back to people. I write under a few different names in Wattpad.  I found short stories a good way to practice style and technique . ( I can think of loads of good story lines but struggle to get them onto paper effectively- so shorts are a good way to practice different styles)
            
            Keep reading-and writing!
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