@JackFrawley I like it, however dark it is, very different from what I normal seek out to read, but it still had some elements making me continue to listen to it. The razor blades part making it hard to walk, yep that was good. On a very much smaller note like your accent!
Val-
New Spoken Word is up on wattpad and for your ears only, vocaroo http://vocaroo.com/i/s1iTlM5JJEGM
Listen to me instead of reading it. Pretty neat, huh? :3
@Repegunaga Yo, sorry. I had an assignment due today that I've been working on, only just got back on this morning before class. I'll check it out now :)
@Repegunaga Usually, no. I don't really write anything except songs and poems, so I really wouldn't be the best person to provide any in-depth criticism. I'll happily read your work though, poetry or not :)
@JonnyCastoArdern Ahahah thanks :)
I first started posting my (admittedly, terrible) poetry in a community that would rip me to shreds over everything I posted. Honestly, I think I would never have grown to be a better poet if they didn't. This popularity contest and circle-jerk mentality on wattpad is stupid :P I don't care if dozens of randoms say "omg gr8 poem" or not, if I have to tell them their shit doesn't stink for that to happen.
I think you're my new favourite Wattpad user. I've been reading some of your critiques of other people's work, and you're knocking it out of the park every time. Nice to meet someone who genuinely wants to hold people's work up and ask 'what the hell is this?' once in a while.